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Tour descriptions that SELL

Genevieve White / February 19, 2024

You know your tours are awesome. So why aren’t they fully booked? There could be a few reasons why your services aren’t getting snapped up. But the tour descriptions on your website might be a good place to start. Your tour descriptions should: Let’s look at each of these points in more detail. Speak to your target customer This doesn’t simply mean knowing who your target customer is (age, gender, socio-economic group, interests etc.). While that’s all important stuff to know, it’s the what. You need to think about the why and the how: Keep these questions firmly in mind as you write your tour descriptions and the answers will shine through your copy. Make it easy to read Confront your readers with long paragraphs at your peril! Whether we like it or not, attention spans are shrinking and no one is going to wade through huge chunks of text on your website. Use short paragraphs, bullet-pointed lists and white space where you can. Also, put yourself in your reader’s shoes and don’t assume they know things. Instead of writing: Climb the Scott Monument. (what’s that?) write Get a bird’s eye view of the city from the Scott Monument, Edinburgh’s 61-metre-high literary landmark. (Sounds cool! I want to do that!) Be specific There are a million tour descriptions out there, describing scenery as breathtaking, spectacular and stunning and monuments as architectural gems, iconic and world-famous. It’s all too easy to reach for the nearest cliche, but this is not going to help your tours stand out from the competition! Use specific details to grab your reader’s attention. Instead of writing: Stop for a drink in Ernest Hemingway’s favourite bar. write Make like Hemingway and drink a daiquiri in Bar El Floridita. See the difference? Less can be more You don’t need to provide every single tour highlight. Long lists don’t look good, and a highlights section should be as its name suggests – a list of two or three of the very best bits from your tour. Keep your best highlights for your first and last bullet points, as these are the points that are most likely to grab your reader’s attention. Write with SEO in mind There’s not much point in writing amazing tour descriptions if no one reads them, is there? Now you’ve spent time crafting your copy, you need to get as many eyes on it as possible. There is lots to say about SEO (and I’ll leave it for another blog post) but a good starting point is to choose a keyword that defines your tour and include it in your title. Then make sure you include the keyword once or twice in the body of your tour description (don’t overdo this or you will be penalised for ‘keyword stuffing’). I’m busy helping a tour operator craft the tour descriptions for their website right now – but will have availability for more of this kind of work from the end of March onwards. Do you need someone to cast an eye over the tours on your website? If so, get in touch.

You’re NOT rubbish at writing

Do you know something I hear A LOT when introducing myself to new people and telling them what I do for a living? ‘I’m rubbish at writing’. Usually, this is said with a sad shake of the head. The same admission is often followed with the tale of the traumatic English class experience that crushed the speaker’s writing confidence. In all honesty, you are probably not a rubbish writer. But you might well be experiencing blocks, something that even perfectly good writers grapple with from time to time. Writing blocks can be caused by all kinds of things, but here are three serious blockers I’ve come across. Read on – do any of these ring a bell? Common Blocks Lack of confidence: this can be caused by all kinds of things. I’ve already mentioned bad experiences at school. But we can also be crippled by the comparisons we make between ourselves and other writers. It’s all too easy to go on to read someone else’s website or blog post and think: ‘Why can’t I write like they do?’ Well, the answer is simple. You can’t write like they do because you’re NOT them. You can, however, write like the best version of YOU. That’s achievable and that’s what you should be aiming for. A lost writing mojo: the single greatest cause of a lost writing mojo is not feeling genuinely interested in what you’re writing about. When you care about something, the words just flow. You don’t need to check your word count every few minutes – instead, you feel pumped and in the zone. So, if you’re struggling to write about your business, maybe it’s a sign. Are there any tweaks you need to make to your offer? Or do you need to find another angle to write about? Not being copy savvy: copywriting is a specific kind of writing with a specific purpose – namely wooing customers and getting sales! It’s therefore very different from writing a report or a business email. What works for those types of writing just won’t cut it when it comes to copy. You need to know your stuff – headline writing, formatting, branding and tone of voice all have an important part to play here. Overcoming writing blocks You don’t have to resign yourself to being rubbish at writing – and neither should you. If you want your business to succeed, choosing the right words to market yourself is absolutely crucial. Working on your writing skills will ultimately save you time and make you money. If you need help overcoming your writing blocks, check out the offers on my services page. From an hour-long Copy Boost session to an intensive 1-1 copywriting programme, I can help you identify your writing blocks and guide you in taking the action you need to overcome them.