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Copywriting

Your website copy audit: what to expect.

What to do if your website isn’t getting you the leads and the bookings you’d like? Okay, so maybe you’re getting a query here, a tyre-kicker there. But that’s hardly the steady flow of bookings you need to thrive and survive. You’ve read and reread your own words so many times that they no longer make sense. You can’t separate the good from the bad and the downright ugly. It’s all…just…words. And now you’ve decided it’s time for a fresh pair of eyes to figure out what’s not working. No, not your partner or your best pal – someone who knows their way around words. And sales. And the tourism and travel industry. What you need is a website copy audit. Who you need…well, we’ll come to that later. For now, let’s talk about copy audits: To find out, keep reading. What is a copy audit? A copy audit lets you see how the words on your website come across to potential customers. Your auditor will start by getting a feel for your copy as a whole. How clear is your overall message (will your customers understand what you offer?) How does your tone sound? Is your structure strong – does it take your customer gently by the hand and steer them where you want them to go? After getting a broad picture, the auditor starts to break things down. They will seek out cliches, fluff and ambiguous language. They will also look at: If there’s something you really want to focus on (perhaps you’re worried you sound too formal, for example) you can mention this to your auditor before they start work. A copywriter who knows what they’re doing will have no difficulty in spotting issues like this, but it’s always useful to hear things from the customer’s perspective. What’s the first step? Your words and website don’t exist in a vacuum. They’re a vital part of your business branding. So any good copy audit should have, as its first step, some fact-finding from the auditor. Personally, my first step is to send my audit customers a detailed questionnaire. The information you provide me helps me find out more about your business, your goals and any challenges you may be facing. And, if there’s anything else I need to know before I get started, I’ll send you some follow-up questions. How personal does a copy audit get? As well as focusing on the areas outlined above, a copy audit may identify issues that are specific to your writing. For example, you may have a tendency to opt for cliches. Or perhaps you have a penchant for the pasive voice. No two copy audits are the same, as everyone has different areas they need to focus on. How detailed is the feedback? You can expect a two-page PDF with detailed feedback on your copy. Included in the PDF is an action plan, so you know the issues you need to address and in what order. Who’s going to do my copy audit? Copy audits are usually carried out by copywriters. That’s because when it comes to: …we know our stuff. But, as you’ll know, there are loads of copywriters out there. Each one with a sparkly website promising you the world on a plate – if only you’ll sign up to their services. How can you choose the one for you? Here are a few tips: And, at the risk of sounding forward, perhaps I can recommend myself? As a travel and tourism copywriter, I spend my days helping businesses like yours. I spend a LOT of time writing and rewriting websites, and I’m familiar with common copy issues, and how to fix them. As a former teacher, I’m used to giving constructive feedback. I won’t tell you your writing’s rubbish, but I will flag any issues and tell you how you need to fix them. No more second-guessing what your customers are making of your website and posts. You’ll know where your copy is falling short and what to do about it. My website copy audit is currently priced at £99.00.

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Copywriting, Insights, Visibility

Tour Pro Talks needs you!

On my weekly LinkedIn Live broadcast this week, I’ll be speaking to Daniela Robinson about how learning German can be a key factor in offering German guests a 5-star experience. I’m looking forward to this for two reasons. Firstly, I’ve been following Daniela on LinkedIn for some time, and I know she’s got heaps of fascinating things to say on the subject. Secondly, this is the tenth instalment in my Tour Pro Talks series. And that’s cause for a little celebration, don’t you think? If you work in tourism and/or you’ve got something to say that might interest your colleagues, then read on – I need your help! Then and now People often congratulate me on having the idea for Tour Pro Talks, but I can’t take the credit. It was the brain-child of my amazing business mentor, Rachael Roberts. When Rachael first suggested it, my first thought was, quite frankly, ‘Eek!’ The thought of hosting a live video interview was terrifying (How on earth would I find interviewees? Who would watch? How would I handle the tech?) but I decided to go for it. And I’m so glad I did. The first episode went amazingly well. I was blessed with a fantastic interviewee (trekking guide, Birman Tamang). We had a supportive audience and both felt completely buoyed by the positivity we were met with. The broadcast was amazing, and I felt very comfortable during it even though hundreds of people were watching us. The comments and questions showed that there was so much interest in hearing from guides, and wow, I felt so much love from the audience. Birman Tamang

Copywriting

5 tell-tale signs your copy is ‘meh’

How do you know if your copy needs a helping hand? The thing is, it’s hard to be objective about the words on your website or your own social media posts. While you may find it easy to rate someone else’s writing, evaluating your own is much harder. Just as mothers are hard-pushed to find any fault with their offspring, writers find it hard to view their own writing with a critical eye. Having said this, there are some tell-tale signs that your copy needs a makeover. Here are five of them. 1. You’re struggling to get by The first sign that your copy is not working hard enough for you is your bank balance. Of course, there can be a raft of reasons why your tourism business is not performing as well as you’d like it to and you’ll need to go through a careful process of elimination to put your finger on the real culprit. issues like inflation and the Airbnb clampdown are all too real, and are having a palpable impact on tourism worldwide. But it should still be possible for your tourism business to make you a decent living. If you’re having a harder time than the other tour operators in your region, it may well be your copy that’s letting you down. 2. You’re getting poor engagement No matter the size of your tourism business, you want there to be a buzz about your brand, don’t you? And that buzz comes from a growing audience, who read and appreciate what you’re doing on your social media platforms. You also want a steady stream of enquiries pumping into your DMs. And, if you have a blog, you need people to be reading it! So if your website has few visitors and no one seems to be noticing (let alone caring) about your posts, this could be yet another sign that you have a copy problem on your hands. 3. You’re attracting the wrong customers Are you falling out of love with your tourism business? Maybe you’re finding customers increasingly difficult to deal with. You might be getting disheartened by underwhelming reviews, or feel like you spend every day firefighting niggles. Increasingly I hear tour operators complain about nightmare customers: the wrong clients really can suck the joy out of a business. It’s easy to let this negativity grind you down instead of getting straight to the root of the problem and finding clients that you’ll be excited to work with. The good news is that your ideal client does exist. And they’re waiting for you. You just need to decide who you want to work with and how you’re going to woo them. Here’s how: And how are you going to do this? Why, through your copy, of course! Specifically, through developing a strong tone of voice for your brand. Just be aware – a strong tone of voice won’t appeal to anyone. It might even repel some people, but they’re not the ones you want to work with anyway.   4. You feel like no one knows you exist    Why do other tourism businesses in your region coming up on top in Google rankings, while you languish at the bottom of page five? If it seems no one has ever heard of you, once again copy could be to blame. You need someone to help you distil the essence of your business. Someone that can use their SEO expertise to get you soaring up these rankings. In short, you need a copywriter (check out my last blogpost if you need some tips on how to choose the right copywriter for you). 5. You don’t feel excited about your copy When you write your copy, you should have a little fire burning in your belly. The same fire will make you want to jump out of bed in the wee small hours, desperate to pin down an idea before it floats away forever. Remember, your copy is the voice of your brand. If it doesn’t light your fire, it’s unlikely to light anyone else’s. Writing about your business is not just about getting information across. It’s about stirring up feelings and getting people to act. And that will only happen when your words align with the beating heart of your brand. Don’t feel too worried if you’ve recognised your own copy in one (or more) of these symptoms. It’s never too late to take action. Sometimes, all you need is a fresh perspective and some expert advice. And I’m happy to provide both. Get in touch if you’d like to have a chat about how we could elevate your words from ‘meh’ to ‘marvellous.’

Travel and tourism copywriter Genevieve White, writing by the sea.
Copywriting

How to choose the best copywriter for you

If you read my recent blog post about copywriting you may have decided that you need some help. Perhaps your tour itineraries need a makeover. Or it could be that you lack confidence in copywriting and want an expert to talk you through the basics. You might just need someone to give you some constructive feedback on a blog post you’ve written. Once you’ve decided you need help, you have to decide who you’re going to approach. There are plenty of copywriters (and copy coaches) out there. Who’s right for you? That depends on a number of factors including: Choices, choices! There are so many copywriters out there, advertising their ‘clear and compelling copywriting’ services on a million sparkly websites. How can you choose the one for you? Here are a few things to think about: Your budget This comes first in the list, as it’s a major consideration. Copywriters’ fees vary considerably and there’s no point setting your heart on someone you simply can’t afford. Beware of jumping at someone whose prices seem a little too bargain-basement though. If getting your entire website copy rewritten for £500 sounds too good to be true, then it probably is! As the old saying goes: pay cheap, pay twice. Window shopping Take as much time as you can to shop around. Ask colleagues for recommendations, look on social media – does anyone stand out? The great thing about choosing a copywriter is that you can check out the way they write their own copy and see if it appeals to you. If the answer to all these questions is ‘yes’ then you could be onto a winner. If their copy doesn’t light your fire, then jog on. Dig deeper Once you’ve narrowed down your list of potential copywriters, do a little more digging. Look for more examples of their writing. What can you find? Can you dig up any examples of writing they’ve done for their clients? (This might not always show up, as copywriters aren’t credited on all the projects they do, but you might come across some blog posts, for example). The second thing to consider is their experience in your particular industry. Now, not all copywriters like to niche down, as many prefer the freedom of being able to write about a wide variety of subjects. However, it’s your choice, and you might prefer to hire someone who is familiar with working for the travel and tourism industry. Now’s the time to check out testimonials. Don’t just look on websites (the testimonials there can sometimes be a little out of date). Check out reviews on their Google Business Pages, and the recommendations on their LinkedIn profiles too. Cut through the fluff and focus on results, whether that be increased sales, heightened understanding or increased confidence. Your gut feeling This comes last on the list, but it is certainly not least. Trust your instinct to tell you whether a copywriter is going to be a good fit for you. Why? Because it’s so important that you ‘click’ with them. Remember, they’re going to be distilling the essence of your beloved brand into words – this is not a task you want to outsource lightly! And – if you’re approaching a copy coach – trusting your instinct is every bit as important. Sharing your writing can be scary, so it’s important you feel completely at ease with the person you’ve chosen to help you. Think about the following things: Most copywriters will offer a one to one meeting, and this is a great way to make your mind up. The idea of having a gut feeling might sound a bit vague, but mine has never failed me in deciding who I want to work with. Could I be the copywriter for you? Well, you didn’t think I was going to let you away without a little plug for my services did you? Here are three reasons you and I could be a match made in heaven. 1. You want an experienced writer I’ve been a freelance writer for over 10 years now. For much of this time, I worked in educational publishing, for big names such as Collins, Pearson and the British Council as well as for smaller companies. I also edited award-winning local magazine (Shetland Life) for two years, and I’m a regular blogger for Promote Shetland. 2. You’d like someone with travel and tourism industry know-how SInce retraining as a copywriter in 2023, I’ve opted to work exclusively for travel and tourism businesses. I’ve delivered copy coaching sessions to tour guides and tour operators around the world, and I’ve also written website copy for luxury tour companies in Ireland and the UK. There’s never a dull moment in the travel and tourism industry, and believe you me, I’ve got my finger right on its throbbing pulse! That’s one of the reasons I host Tour Pro Talks, a weekly LinkedIn Live where I interview a different tour professional every week. This means I am switched on to all the hottest trends in this rapidly evolving industry. 3. You need someone who gets results As well as writing, I’ve also been a teacher for over 20 years. I’ve taught children and adults in schools, colleges and universities around the world. I’m experienced in helping people to set realistic goals, and I love nothing more than helping people smash their goals. If it sounds like I could be the one for you, let’s meet so you can allow your gut instinct to do the talking. Contact me , so we can have a chat about how I can help your tourism business.

Copywriting

The 7 deadly copy sins that cost you customers

You’ve spent forever writing the copy on your tourism website, but you’re still not getting the engagement you’d been hoping for. Reading it over, you think something is missing. Trouble is, you can’t quite put your finger on it. If you worry that your copy is not quite hitting the mark, you might be making one or more of the most common copy mistakes. Check out the list below. Can you recognise yourself in any of these? 1. Sounding too corporate A few months ago, I worked with an amazing tour guide. How did I know they were amazing? They had gazillions of customer reviews showing what a warm, funny, fascinating and all-round good egg they were. Would I have picked this up from their website? Hm, not so much. You see, this tour guide had fallen into the trap of thinking that trustworthy = corporate. So, despite the fact that they were a one-person band, they’d used the third-person plural throughout their copy (we are instead of I am.) When I asked them why, they said it would be unprofessional to use the first person. Well. We soon knocked that one on the head! Put yourself in your customers’ shoes. Who are you booking a tour with? A person or a corporation? And (as I think we’d all prefer a person) wouldn’t you like to feel you knew a bit about that person before booking your tour? Top tip: I’m sure you’ll have heard the phrase People buy from People (unless you’ve been living in a cupboard). Well, it’s true. Bear it in mind when you write your copy. 2. Using bland adjectives This picturesque island boasts spectacular scenery and countless beautiful beaches. The adjectives above need a well-earned break, wouldn’t you agree? They’ve been crawling all over travel copy for years, describing destinations from Stockholm to Shanghai. Can we retire them, please? When you write, use adjectives that are less overdone. If the surrounding scenery is rich in plant life, what about lush or verdant? If you really must write about a breathtaking view, could you switch breathtaking for panoramic or atmospheric? Top tip: Tools such as word hippo can be helpful here. 3. Being too general This is linked to the second deadly copy sin, and it’s just as much of a copy killer. When I look at tourism websites (and believe me, this is something I do a lot) I can’t help but notice how generic the writing seems. So many travel blogs, if you were to blank out the specific place names and references to tourists sites, could be describing just about anywhere in the world. The key to any good writing is to be specific. Don’t write The cafe serves delicious local produce, try Warm up in Pete’s Cafe with a rib-sticking lentil soup. You see the difference? The first example says nothing; with the second I can feel the salty soup warming my chilled bones. Top tip: As you go about your daily life in your destination, note down specific details that could find your way into your copy. Try to record the things that make your destination different. Or ask your customers to share things they’ve noticed. 4. Ignoring your audience If you’re committing deadly copy sins 1-4, this is probably the root of all your wrong-doing! You see, if you know who you audience are, you’ll speak directly to them. Your copy will not be corporate, as you’ll feel like you’re chatting to a good friend when you write it. Your words are less likely to be bland and generic, because you’ll know what your audience want to hear from you. Top tip: If visitors coming to your destination have a particular interest, think about how you can weave that interest into your copy. For example, loads of visitors to Shetland are into the BBC crime drama Shetland. So, a good idea for a blog post (which I haven’t written yet!) could be 5 places you’ll recognise from the Shetland series with a little bit of detail about each one. Another top tip: And, when it comes to thinking about your audience, why not put them centre stage? How about doing a weekly or monthly interview with one of your customers? Or asking them to write a guest blog post about their experiences in your destination? Not only does this give you some great free content, it goes a long way to making your customers feeling valued and important. A win-win. 5. Going into essay-writing mode The first thing to know about writing tourism copy? You’re not at school anymore. – No gold stars for big words.– No prizes for hefty word counts.– No kudos for complex sentences. Quite the opposite, in fact! The copy you write for your tourism business needs to sound like a friendly voice talking in your customers’ ears. And when was the last time your pal spoke to you in paragraphs? Top tip: If you struggle with writing in a natural tone of voice, why not record yourself talking onto your phone? Then you can use the dictate function on Word to capture what you’ve said. The result will need a bit of editing, but should sound much more natural. 6. Not reading your copy before publishing it When you run your own business, you’re not only your own copywriter, you’re your own editor and proofreader too. Don’t leave out the editing and proofreading part – it’s really important. Now, of course, people will forgive the odd typo, but if you’re doing it regularly you risk being seen as unprofessional. Things to watch out for: Top tip: If possible, give your copy a day or so to sit before publishing it. Guaranteed you’ll see things you want to change when you come back to it. 7. Forgetting to include your CTA I’ve spoken about this before because it’s so important! You may have written a great description, but if you’ve not included a CTA (a

Copywriting

Done-for-you copy or copy coaching – which is right for you?

Visited my services page yet? Then you’ll know that I offer two types of services: copy coaching and done-for-you copywriting. And, if you’re needing help with a particular piece of copy (e.g.: the tours on your website, or your About Page), you might be wondering about which option would suit you and your business best. Why choose done-for-you? Have a look at the following scenarios. Which of them (if any) do you identify with? You’re in a hurry. You’ve set yourself a deadline and you’re determined to meet it. Say, for example, you want all your tours to be written up by the end of next month, so they’re ready to feature on your newly designed website. You know that you’ll never be able to pull this off yourself, as there simply aren’t enough hours in the day. You have no interest in writing your own copy. There are many things you love about running a tourism business, but writing isn’t one of them and never will be. The very thought of it gives you the boke, and you’d much rather outsource it to an expert. What’s more, all this talk about ‘tone of voice’ and ‘branding’ leaves you cold. Words are just words aren’t they? You just want a professional to write you copy that converts. Is that too much to ask? You’re willing to invest money on getting good copy, both now and in the future. You know that good copywriters don’t come cheap. After all, you’re paying them not just for the time they spend actually writing your copy, but also for the hours they invest in researching your business and honing their own skills and expertise. You also know that you’ll need to make further investments in the future, as your tourism business continues to evolve. If you recognise yourself in any of these scenarios, then getting your copy done for you might be an option. Don’t think that done-for-you copywriting will get you completely off the hook though! A good copywriter will involve you in the process from the very start. They’ll ask you questions that will really get you thinking about your business, your target audience and your offering. The answers you give your chosen copywriter will go towards writing copy that is laser-focused on your audience’s needs. The result? Visitors to your website will feel like you – and the tours you offer – are a perfect fit. Why choose copy coaching? Or do you feel more in tune with these perspectives? You don’t want to keep forking out for copy. You might change the kind of tours you offer. You might decide to start targeting a new audience. You could even repackage your services altogether. Whether the changes you make are big or small, you’re going to need to update your copy. Do you really want to cough up every time you make a change? You want to feel more confident about the words you use. The lessons you learn through copy coaching aren’t just applicable to writing website copy. You can apply the same principles to your social media posts and comments, your email marketing, blog posts and more. You’ll start to understand the psychology of marketing and sales and you’ll be confident your words are hitting home. And when that happens, writing is no longer a chore, it’s fun! You need the accountability of working with a coach. You want to write your own copy, but you struggle to get round to it. ‘Start a blog’ or ‘rewrite my tours’ have been on your to-do list for months, but you never seem to get any closer to getting ticking them off. You need a friendly, experienced guide who will motivate you into setting goals, hold you accountable for these goals and provide you with honest, constructive feedback. If any of this sounds like you, copy coaching might be the way forward. In that case, take time to find a copy coach who: Hybrid approaches Sometimes, though, it’s not as clear cut as wanting done-for-you copy or copy coaching. Could any of the following apply to you? You want a second pair of eyes on your copy. Say you’ve written your About Page. You’re pretty happy with it, but you’d like a second opinion. You want a professional to tell you: You want your copy edited for SEO. You’re happy with your copy, and you want to make sure people read it! In that case, you’ll need help in identifying keywords and inputting them in your copy (in a way that doesn’t sound unnatural or clunky). You need some content planning advice. Perhaps you feel confident enough about writing, but are stuck for what to write about? Many copywriters will be happy to help you brainstorm ideas for content. You’ll be guaranteed to come away with content ideas to last you into the next year. Whether you want help with done-for-you copywriting, copy coaching or a more hybrid approach I can help you. I offer a bespoke service to each individual client, so whatever your copywriting needs, I’m confident I can come up with a package to suit you. Get in touch, and let’s see how I can help you feel more confident about your copy.

Copywriting

What is copywriting and how can it boost your tourism business?

I’d registered the occasional puzzled face when mentioning my work to friends and family but had never given it too much thought. Until last week, when a friend said ‘Oh, you’ll know all about that, won’t you? You work with copyright.’ It was then I realised I’d been assuming that everyone knew exactly what copywriting was. And maybe they don’t. So, at the risk of sounding patronising, I’ll explain what copywriting is (if you know this inside out already, feel free to skip to the next sub-heading!). Copywriting is not to do with intellectual property rights. That’s copyright, and you can find lots of good information about that here (just in case you stumbled across this page by accident when trying to find out how to protect the rights to your latest masterpiece). So, what is copywriting? Copywriting is persuasive writing. It’s the kind of writing you do when you want your reader to take a specific action, whether that be: And, when you’re running a tourism business, every word you write to your customers (or potential customers) is your copy. That includes the words on your: It even includes words you might not have thought much about before. For example, the words on your out of office reply. Or the error messages and pop-up hints on your website (these are sometimes referred to as microcopy and although they are small, they are super-important!). Or take the words on your call-to-action buttons. Ever thought much about these? Hm, thought not. Well, in a recent LinkedIn post, I shared the story of a tour operator who increased their bookings by 25 percent after changing the text on their website button from ‘Buy Now’ to ‘See Dates’. Talking of calls to action (CTAs) these are crucial! Without one, a piece of writing cannot really be called copy. It’s all very well taking the time to craft a persuasive paragraph, but if you don’t tell your readers what to do at the end of it, you may as well not bother. What copywriting is NOT So, that’s what copywriting is. And, in the interests of clearing up some common misconceptions, here are three things that copywriting is NOT. How can copywriting boost your travel business? Now you know what copywriting is (and isn’t) why is it so important for your travel business? Good copywriting will make customers much more likely to engage with your brand (72% more likely, according to this recent survey). It will also boost your visibility. 88% of SEO specialists believe that quality copywriting is essential for high search engine rankings. Simply put, your words are powerful. You may have stunning photos of your destination (and so you should!) but it’s the words you write that will get your customers reaching for their credit cards – or scrolling on by. Your copy counts for so much at every stage of your customer’s journey. Boost your copywriting confidence Didn’t I tell you that every piece of copy needs a CTA? Well, here’s mine. If you’re reading this and thinking ‘Yes, Genevieve, I understand what copywriting is, but I’m not sure I’m doing it right!’ then don’t despair. If you’d like to learn about the hows and whys of copywriting, I can help you. I offer 1-1 coaching sessions, tailored to suit the needs of you and your business. You can choose between a single Copy Boost session or my in-depth six-week course. Find out more about my services here. Alternatively, I can write your copy for you. Contact me to find out more about what investing in good copy could do for your tourism business.

Blogging, Copywriting

How can AI help to boost your travel and tourism blog?

My work involves spending a lot of time browsing travel and tourism blogs (yes, I have permanent wanderlust!). And often I’ll come across a blog that looks enticing at first glance only to find that its content is 100% AI-produced. What a missed opportunity! Why? Well, AI-written content is just incredibly dull to read. Surely one of the great pleasures of reading is the feeling that you are hearing the voice of a fellow-human in your head? Whether it be sassy, confident, quirky, authoritative, tentative, or warm – every writer has their own unique voice. And that’s something you just don’t get with AI. Of course, brand voice is a concept we’re all familiar with. But my feeling is that it’s particularly important in tourism marketing. This is because the success of any travel experience depends, to a great extent, on the connection you have with the tour professionals leading it. If that connection is strong, you get an experience you’ll always remember. If it’s not – well, your experience might end up being memorable for all the wrong reasons. How can your customers make an informed decision to choose you when you’re asking them to wade through screeds of bland robotese? AI or human-produced copy? Now, I know what you’re thinking. I’m a copywriter who writings for a living! So of course, I’m going to be twitchy about the robots taking over. And maybe I should be. A 2023 survey by Nativo revealed that 53% of adults were unable to distinguish between real content and artificially generated content. On the face of it, this statistic does sound worrying. I’m skeptical though. Okay, perhaps the people involved in the survey were unable to identify the robot-produced content. But were they asked which content they preferred? Had they been asked this question, I’m prepared to bet that they’d opt for the human-produced version. We know that AI is improving all the time. But it will never have a human heart. It will never have access to a lifetime of experience. Neither will it possess the quirks that make you you and me me. In short, AI alone is not (and may never be) enough to write you blog posts that will connect with and convert customers. So, if you think you can populate your blog with AI-written content, think again. My AI blog-writing experiment Here’a a little AI experiment I tried recently. I looked up a fairly recent blog post I wrote for Promote Shetland. The topic was ‘creative pursuits you can do in Shetland over winter’. Here are two opening paragraphs. One is written by me, one is fully AI generated. Can you guess which is which? — One Welcome to our blog post on creative things to do in Shetland over winter! As the days grow shorter and the air turns crisp, Shetland transforms into a winter wonderland filled with opportunities for artistic expression and exploration. From cozying up in a traditional crofthouse with a hot cup of tea to immersing yourself in the vibrant arts and crafts scene, there is no shortage of creative activities to enjoy during the colder months in this picturesque island archipelago. Join us as we delve into some of the most inspiring and unique ways to unleash your creativity in Shetland this winter. Two Chillier temperatures and shorter days are often associated with hibernation. Not so in Shetland, where winter activities are a far cry from bingeing on box sets and getting into full goblin mode. Instead, the colder months are a cosy, sociable time, where locals fill the hours of darkness with creative pursuits from crafting to creative writing. — Which do you think is mine? And why? Check out the clunky opening sentence in paragraph one. Note also the cliches such as ‘winter wonderland’ and ‘unleash your creativity’. Paragraph one packs in numerous paraphrases of my prompt text, e.g.: ‘creative pursuits’ and ‘artistic expression’ and, in my opinion, the effect is a little OTT. Is it all bad? No. I like the ‘hot cup of tea’ bit (although I’d argue that tea-drinking in itself is not a creative activity!) but overall it’s like wading through verbal blancmange. The second paragraph, in contrast, sounds more natural. The ‘bingeing on box sets’ and ‘full goblin mode’ sound like they were written by a human (albeit a fairly lazy one). It’s less wordy too. AI can help you – with some caveats Having said all of this, AI can help you write great posts for your travel and tourism blog – it can save you time too! – but you need to know what you’re doing. And you will still need to engage your own brain. Here are some key things to bear in mind. In my work as an editor, I’ve often been sent AI texts and instructed to ‘humanise’ them (very 1984, I know). Not a job I relish doing, as quite frankly, it takes a lot longer to humanise a robotic text than it does to write one myself from scratch. So if you choose to humanise an AI text you’ve generated, be aware it’s a time-consuming process with a lot of rewriting. How I use AI to blog AI can be helpful, but over-reliance on it will get you nowhere fast. Used strategically though, it can be a great time-saver. — Well, here ends the final instalment of my blogging mini-series. I hope you’ve found it useful, and that you’re now ready to blog with confidence. One thing that writing this mini-series has brought home to me is that there is so much to think about when it comes to blogging! If you’re still feeling bamboozled by it all, and would like a little hand-holding to get your blog underway, get in touch. In a one-hour Copy Boost session, I’ll answer your blogging questions, help you devise your blogging strategy and send you on your way raring to go! Check out my services page to find out more.

A typewriter on a desk ready to write a tourism blog post
Blogging, Copywriting

How to write a banging blog post

You’ve overcome your blogging blocks and you’ve got a list of great content ideas to get you started on your blogging journey. (Or at least you should have if you’ve been keeping up to date with my previous posts.) Now, are you ready to write your first blog post? The truth is, no matter how well you may have prepared yourself, the act of sitting down and writing isn’t always easy. Writer’s block, procrastination and fear of failure can all become deadly enemies. With this in mind, here’s a simple process to follow for writing those first few blog posts. After a while, it should become second nature. 1. Beat the blank page Getting started is the hardest thing. So resist the temptation to start at the very beginning – it’s not always a very good place to start despite what Maria might tell you. Instead, write down everything you know about the topic in question. Set a timer for 8 minutes and let your ideas flow onto the page. Resist the temptation to edit – that can come later. So can your introduction and your title. This is where it’s really important to have chosen something you actually want to write about. When I’ve chosen a topic I feel I know inside out and am desperate to share, the words just tumble out of me. The trick is to find something that both you and your readers are interested in. (I could have fun writing about my favourite types of cheese, but would visitors to this blog find that helpful? I doubt it.) 2. Choose a format Now you’ve decided on your topic, you need to choose a format. If you’re new to blogging, listicles can be a great place to start. While some may argue that listicles have become a hackneyed cliche, there is a a good deal of evidence to suggest that this simple, easily digestible format is still as popular as ever. And there’s no denying that certain types of content simply lend themselves to listicles. Say, for instance, I want to write a blog post about the top ten family-friendly attractions in London. Why on earth wouldn’t I choose the listicle format? There are plenty other formats which you can and should experiment with though. For example: I’ve shared these formats as I think they’re the most straightforward to write, but the possibilities are endless! Check out this article for more help with choosing the right format for your next blog post. 3. Build the body Now we’re onto the meat of your post. There’s a lot to say here (probably a whole post’s worth), but in the interests of brevity I will give you just 5 things to think about. 4. Write your heading Coming up with an engaging heading is not an easy task, but choosing the right one will pay dividends. Your heading is not just a way to entice readers to keep reading: it’s also a way to get eyes on your post (if you’re strategic with keywords). Please note: this blog post’s title is not a good example of an SEO-friendly one. My original title was ‘How to write a tourism blog post’ which might have been better for SEO but just sounded dull beyond belief. SEO is hugely important, but sometimes you have to go with what feels good! (I’ll be going into SEO in much more detail in my next post.) Finally, and this should go without saying, make sure your title accurately reflects the content of your post. So don’t write a blog post with the title ‘Taylor Swift’s Top Tips for a fun time in Tenerife’ if your post doesn’t mention Tenerife. Because if you do that, you’ve just produced a piece of click-bait. And that’s naughty. 5. Have a clear CTA Why are you blogging? Is it just for fun? Nope, thought not. While blogging can be a lot of fun, I’m guessing there are other things you might want to be doing with your time. You’re blogging to get people booking your tours. You’re blogging to build know, like, trust. You’re blogging to increase your visibility. So make sure the CTA at the end of your blog posts rewards your effort in writing it. And you can do that by including a clear call to action. Not 3 or 4 – remember, confused minds don’t buy. Just write one thing you want your readers to do. For an example, see the end of this post. 6. Go ahead and click publish! A mentor of mine has a saying which I love so much that I’ve adopted it as my own: ‘Better done than perfect’. Your post will never be perfect. Maybe the ideal heading will elude you (I’m not convinced about the heading for this post!). Or perhaps you could source some better photos. And you should definitely proofread it a few days later. Isn’t that what the writing gurus say? The thing is, the longer you procrastinate, the less likely you are to publish the darn thing. And then no one will ever read what you have to say. Wouldn’t that be a shame? Remember, the beauty of blogging is you can always go back and make changes later on. So be bold! What have you got to lose? Click that button with confidence! Done it? Congratulations – you’ve embarked on your blogging journey. It’s going to be a thrilling ride! (Psst: here’s my CTA!) If you’re still bewildered by blogging (and I know there’s a lot to take in) book a Copy Boost session with me. This hour will be laser-focused on your specific needs, giving you the confidence and know-how you need to write a truly banging blog post. Interested? DM me on LinkedIn or email me at genevieve@campioncopy.com

Women conducting keyword research for her tourism blog
Blogging, Copywriting, Visibility

10 places to find blogging inspiration

So, you’ve decided to blog about your tourism business. Congratulations! It’s going to be fun – and, if you’re committed, it will pay dividends. There’s just one tiny issue. What on earth are you going to blog about? You’ve maybe got an idea for your first couple of posts – but what then? Fear not, I have good news for you. Posting inspiration is all around! And I’m here to show you 10 places where your next great blog post idea might be lurking… 1. Your own brain The process I am about to describe may sound a little retro. Stick with me, ok? Yes, I know there are loads of online places you can go for inspiration (we’ll be covering these in a moment!) but nothing beats sitting down with a big (I’m talking A2) piece of paper, some coloured sharpies and just letting your mind generate as many ideas as possible. Some of these ideas will not be worth pursuing, others will be pure gold. And keep a pen and notebook beside your bed. How many times have I woken up in the small hours with a brilliant idea, thinking ‘my next post is in the bag!’ only to wake up the next morning to find it has disappeared? (Answer: a lot). Good ideas are flighty little critters – don’t let them slip away. 2. Your DMs Think of your DMs as a repository for FAQS. Then mine these DMS for potential blog posts. For example, visitors to Shetland (where I live) might ask questions like: Any one of these questions could be the basis of a great blog post. And it’s not just questions you’ll find in your DMS. You’ll also find feedback (both positive and negative) which could spark inspiration. For example, what do your customers particularly like about your tours? What particular tour highlights do they mention, and how could you blog about them? 3. My free resource My free resource (available here) catchily titled 30 social media post ideas for tour guides and tour operators can also be a great leaping-off point for the beginner blogger. Behold – here are just three of its suggestions for social media posts: Just writing these ideas down is getting my creative juices flowing! Download my freebie (if you haven’t already) and get writing. Or filming. Or podcasting. (Remember, blogs don’t have to be written.) 4. Your own social media posts Linking on from my previous point, let’s talk about repurposing. Not every blog post you write for your tourism business needs to be a brand new idea (if you take this approach, you’re going to reach blogger burnout fairly quickly!). Scan your social media posts for posts that could be developed into blog posts (bonus points if you choose ones that have got good engagement – this means they’re likely to appeal to your customers). Then expand upon them. For example: Don’t worry about being repetitive. Bear in mind that a tiny percentage of your followers will have seen your original social media post, and even if they have, they’ve probably forgotten it by now. 5. Other tour bloggers’ work Other people’s blogs are always a great source of inspiration. It’s not going to hurt a tour guide on the other side of the world (or even the country) if you copy the style and format of one of their blog posts, is it? For example, if you’re a tour guide in Paris reading a blog post on ‘5 family-friendly days-out in New York’ why not do the same for your city? Here’s a blog post I wrote, where I interviewed a local birder about Shetland’s top ten summer birds and their dialect names. Could you write a similar post about your local wildlife? 6. Outside of tourism Once you’ve got into the habit of blogging, you’ll find ideas everywhere you go. Sometimes we get so immersed in our little tourism bubble, that we forget to look further afield. Next time you’re checking out a blog on one of your other interests (come on, I’m sure you have at least one!) stay alert to format, style and content. Whether it’s a blog on miniature modelling, health and wellness or DIY, you’re likely to find content ideas you can adapt for your own tourism blog. 7. Your own backyard Okay – you may need to go slightly further than this. But get up, go for a walk. See your destination with fresh eyes. If you were visiting for the first time, what would you want to know? Remember – people love to feel they are discovering a city’s secrets. Are there any off-the-beaten-track places you could share? A retro clothes shop? A community garden? A cake fridge?* *In Shetland, cake fridges are a thing! Imagine being out for a walk in the middle of nowhere and stumbling across a box full of homemade goodies! 8. Google I’ll be covering SEO tips later on in this blogging mini-series, as this is vital stuff to know when you’re blogging. Writing content that answers frequently asked questions is one easy way of making sure your content gets read – and it’s also a valuable source of posting inspiration. In the meantime, playing around with Google Search can be a great way of finding out the topics that people have been searching for. And if people have been searching for these topics, you can bet they’re going to want to read about them. This article is a handy step-by-step guide to help you generate blog ideas on Google. 9. Your customers Why not ask your customers directly what they’d like you to blog about? Social media polls are a great way of doing this. Your customers will feel you care, and you’ll get some great content ideas! Win win. 10. Your life Hope you haven’t thrown away the sharpies and paper we were using in number 1. You’ll need them for this bit. Although last on the list, this item is

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