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5 tell-tale signs your copy is ‘meh’

Genevieve White / April 29, 2024

How do you know if your copy needs a helping hand? The thing is, it’s hard to be objective about the words on your website or your own social media posts. While you may find it easy to rate someone else’s writing, evaluating your own is much harder. Just as mothers are hard-pushed to find any fault with their offspring, writers find it hard to view their own writing with a critical eye. Having said this, there are some tell-tale signs that your copy needs a makeover. Here are five of them. 1. You’re struggling to get by The first sign that your copy is not working hard enough for you is your bank balance. Of course, there can be a raft of reasons why your tourism business is not performing as well as you’d like it to and you’ll need to go through a careful process of elimination to put your finger on the real culprit. issues like inflation and the Airbnb clampdown are all too real, and are having a palpable impact on tourism worldwide. But it should still be possible for your tourism business to make you a decent living. If you’re having a harder time than the other tour operators in your region, it may well be your copy that’s letting you down. 2. You’re getting poor engagement No matter the size of your tourism business, you want there to be a buzz about your brand, don’t you? And that buzz comes from a growing audience, who read and appreciate what you’re doing on your social media platforms. You also want a steady stream of enquiries pumping into your DMs. And, if you have a blog, you need people to be reading it! So if your website has few visitors and no one seems to be noticing (let alone caring) about your posts, this could be yet another sign that you have a copy problem on your hands. 3. You’re attracting the wrong customers Are you falling out of love with your tourism business? Maybe you’re finding customers increasingly difficult to deal with. You might be getting disheartened by underwhelming reviews, or feel like you spend every day firefighting niggles. Increasingly I hear tour operators complain about nightmare customers: the wrong clients really can suck the joy out of a business. It’s easy to let this negativity grind you down instead of getting straight to the root of the problem and finding clients that you’ll be excited to work with. The good news is that your ideal client does exist. And they’re waiting for you. You just need to decide who you want to work with and how you’re going to woo them. Here’s how: And how are you going to do this? Why, through your copy, of course! Specifically, through developing a strong tone of voice for your brand. Just be aware – a strong tone of voice won’t appeal to anyone. It might even repel some people, but they’re not the ones you want to work with anyway. 4. You feel like no one knows you exist Why do other tourism businesses in your region coming up on top in Google rankings, while you languish at the bottom of page five? If it seems no one has ever heard of you, once again copy could be to blame. You need someone to help you distil the essence of your business. Someone that can use their SEO expertise to get you soaring up these rankings. In short, you need a copywriter (check out my last blogpost if you need some tips on how to choose the right copywriter for you). 5. You don’t feel excited about your copy When you write your copy, you should have a little fire burning in your belly. The same fire will make you want to jump out of bed in the wee small hours, desperate to pin down an idea before it floats away forever. Remember, your copy is the voice of your brand. If it doesn’t light your fire, it’s unlikely to light anyone else’s. Writing about your business is not just about getting information across. It’s about stirring up feelings and getting people to act. And that will only happen when your words align with the beating heart of your brand. Don’t feel too worried if you’ve recognised your own copy in one (or more) of these symptoms. It’s never too late to take action. Sometimes, all you need is a fresh perspective and some expert advice. And I’m happy to provide both. Get in touch if you’d like to have a chat about how we could elevate your words from ‘meh’ to ‘marvellous.’

Copywriting

The 7 deadly copy sins that cost you customers

Genevieve White / April 15, 2024

You’ve spent forever writing the copy on your tourism website, but you’re still not getting the engagement you’d been hoping for. Reading it over, you think something is missing. Trouble is, you can’t quite put your finger on it. If you worry that your copy is not quite hitting the mark, you might be making one or more of the most common copy mistakes. Check out the list below. Can you recognise yourself in any of these? 1. Sounding too corporate A few months ago, I worked with an amazing tour guide. How did I know they were amazing? They had gazillions of customer reviews showing what a warm, funny, fascinating and all-round good egg they were. Would I have picked this up from their website? Hm, not so much. You see, this tour guide had fallen into the trap of thinking that trustworthy = corporate. So, despite the fact that they were a one-person band, they’d used the third-person plural throughout their copy (we are instead of I am.) When I asked them why, they said it would be unprofessional to use the first person. Well. We soon knocked that one on the head! Put yourself in your customers’ shoes. Who are you booking a tour with? A person or a corporation? And (as I think we’d all prefer a person) wouldn’t you like to feel you knew a bit about that person before booking your tour? Top tip: I’m sure you’ll have heard the phrase People buy from People (unless you’ve been living in a cupboard). Well, it’s true. Bear it in mind when you write your copy. 2. Using bland adjectives This picturesque island boasts spectacular scenery and countless beautiful beaches. The adjectives above need a well-earned break, wouldn’t you agree? They’ve been crawling all over travel copy for years, describing destinations from Stockholm to Shanghai. Can we retire them, please? When you write, use adjectives that are less overdone. If the surrounding scenery is rich in plant life, what about lush or verdant? If you really must write about a breathtaking view, could you switch breathtaking for panoramic or atmospheric? Top tip: Tools such as word hippo can be helpful here. 3. Being too general This is linked to the second deadly copy sin, and it’s just as much of a copy killer. When I look at tourism websites (and believe me, this is something I do a lot) I can’t help but notice how generic the writing seems. So many travel blogs, if you were to blank out the specific place names and references to tourists sites, could be describing just about anywhere in the world. The key to any good writing is to be specific. Don’t write The cafe serves delicious local produce, try Warm up in Pete’s Cafe with a rib-sticking lentil soup. You see the difference? The first example says nothing; with the second I can feel the salty soup warming my chilled bones. Top tip: As you go about your daily life in your destination, note down specific details that could find your way into your copy. Try to record the things that make your destination different. Or ask your customers to share things they’ve noticed. 4. Ignoring your audience If you’re committing deadly copy sins 1-4, this is probably the root of all your wrong-doing! You see, if you know who you audience are, you’ll speak directly to them. Your copy will not be corporate, as you’ll feel like you’re chatting to a good friend when you write it. Your words are less likely to be bland and generic, because you’ll know what your audience want to hear from you. Top tip: If visitors coming to your destination have a particular interest, think about how you can weave that interest into your copy. For example, loads of visitors to Shetland are into the BBC crime drama Shetland. So, a good idea for a blog post (which I haven’t written yet!) could be 5 places you’ll recognise from the Shetland series with a little bit of detail about each one. Another top tip: And, when it comes to thinking about your audience, why not put them centre stage? How about doing a weekly or monthly interview with one of your customers? Or asking them to write a guest blog post about their experiences in your destination? Not only does this give you some great free content, it goes a long way to making your customers feeling valued and important. A win-win. 5. Going into essay-writing mode The first thing to know about writing tourism copy? You’re not at school anymore. – No gold stars for big words.– No prizes for hefty word counts.– No kudos for complex sentences. Quite the opposite, in fact! The copy you write for your tourism business needs to sound like a friendly voice talking in your customers’ ears. And when was the last time your pal spoke to you in paragraphs? Top tip: If you struggle with writing in a natural tone of voice, why not record yourself talking onto your phone? Then you can use the dictate function on Word to capture what you’ve said. The result will need a bit of editing, but should sound much more natural. 6. Not reading your copy before publishing it When you run your own business, you’re not only your own copywriter, you’re your own editor and proofreader too. Don’t leave out the editing and proofreading part – it’s really important. Now, of course, people will forgive the odd typo, but if you’re doing it regularly you risk being seen as unprofessional. Things to watch out for: Top tip: If possible, give your copy a day or so to sit before publishing it. Guaranteed you’ll see things you want to change when you come back to it. 7. Forgetting to include your CTA I’ve spoken about this before because it’s so important! You may have written a great description, but if you’ve not included a CTA (a